- Thesis: US citizens born into low-income families in poor neighborhoods have less of a chance at the American Dream , so we need to create Federal laws that invest in these communities in ways that don't hurt other citizens' chances.
II. Body
A. TS 1 (P): One way America can start to equalize opportunities for those living below the poverty line is to require a Federal minimum wage that meets cost of living.
Revised TS 1 (gets rid of linking verb "is"): Having a Federal minimum wage that meets cost of living signifies one way America can start to equalize opportunities for those living below the poverty line.
- One Reason: The minimum wage was created to make sure working citizens can survive without having to work two to three jobs just to get by.
- Example:
B. TS 2:
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