Editing: Don't Be So Shifty

1. When do you use "you" appropriately?

2. How do you keep time?

3.  Stay indicative in mood.  (Same subject-verb structure from sentence to sentence)

4. Stay active in tense (s-v-o structure) in each sentence.

5. Stay within the same syntax when quoting or questioning within a combined/linked sentences.

• one editing consideration: read the shared part of a sentence with the multiple actions